HowTo talk:Defend your Home

From Uncyclopedia, the content-free encyclopedia.
Jump to: navigation, search

FAQ

[[{{#sub:Defend your Home|0|{{#rpos:Defend your Home|(}}}}]][edit]

Um yeah had this reviewed already. This was an article I made ages ago which sucked and I'm trying to make it better. Constructive critiscm would be much appreciated. I have made changes since the last review but I'm all out of ideas and dont really know what needs changing.

Wow thanks, that was way more helpful than the last one.

UnNinja 15:42, 6 July 2009 (UTC)

: {{{{{#sub:HCPIM|0|1}}comment}}}
: {{{{{#sub:HCPIM|1|1}}comment}}}
: {{{{{#sub:HCPIM|2|1}}comment}}}
: {{{{{#sub:HCPIM|3|1}}comment}}}
: {{{{{#sub:HCPIM|4|1}}comment}}}
Final Score: 31 While this review is very negative I would hope that you are not discouraged, it has the makings of a very good article, if you work at it. My main comments would be, try to ditch the self-deprecating humour and remain detached from the article. Expand a couple of sections, and be a bit more subtle. Good luck with any editing.
Reviewer: --ChiefjusticeDS 18:05, 6 July 2009 (UTC)


FAQ

[[{{#sub:Defend your Home|0|{{#rpos:Defend your Home|(}}}}]][edit]

UnNinja 23:46, 5 July 2009 (UTC)

Mr Zhe-mel-talki-signe-singaporel-bling Brute! ~02:06/6 of July

: {{{{{#sub:HCPIM|0|1}}comment}}}
: {{{{{#sub:HCPIM|1|1}}comment}}}
: {{{{{#sub:HCPIM|2|1}}comment}}}
: {{{{{#sub:HCPIM|3|1}}comment}}}
: {{{{{#sub:HCPIM|4|1}}comment}}}
Final Score: 34.676545 Nice article. Keep working on it!
Reviewer: Mr Zhe-mel-talki-signe-singaporel-bling Brute! ~02:36/6 of July


FAQ

[[{{#sub:Defend your Home|0|{{#rpos:Defend your Home|(}}}}]][edit]

http://uncyclopedia.wikia.com/wiki/HowTo:Defend_your_Home Ragnarok 14:38, August 4, 2010 (UTC)

Mine. 24 hours or it's cancelled... --Some Idiot Image002.png 07:26, August 11, 2010 (UTC)

: {{{{{#sub:HCPIM|0|1}}comment}}}
: {{{{{#sub:HCPIM|1|1}}comment}}}
: {{{{{#sub:HCPIM|2|1}}comment}}}
: {{{{{#sub:HCPIM|3|1}}comment}}}
: {{{{{#sub:HCPIM|4|1}}comment}}}
Final Score: 36.25 This is a great concept and your basic content is actually pretty good. But if you build it and fix it up in the ways I have mentioned, it could definitely be a high quality article. I hope to see you writing more great stuff soon, and I hope that helped!
Reviewer: --Some Idiot Image002.png 11:47, August 11, 2010 (UTC)