From Pee Review
For one, you don't need 3 empty lines seperating sections.
There should be at least 7. Secondly, clean up that thing. The article is unbelievably messy. Thirdly, expand on the jokes. Make a reference to something; associate the cult of seven with a real cult or conspiracy theorist or something. I hope I don't sound rude, but there are some who would label you a n00b and do bad things to you because of it. Read some of the Featured Articles, then hurry back to 7 and clean it up before anybody sees it. Write a joke, act like a bloke, go out for a smoke, chop down an oak, give your feet a good soak, don't, for god's sake, write any damn rhymes. -- 08:27, 28 October 2006 (UTC)