Talk:Burt Ward

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Ok, without giving an entire review of this I am going to give you my suggestions rather than do an arbitrary review. Bare in mind, I am still a noob and may not have a sense of humor that works with all crowds (still not sure if you've read any of my work). Take what advice you like disguard the shit you don't. Never forget it is your piece and you'll always be able to find someone who says they don't get it. Well, here we go.

• Suggestions-1.Scrap your current format. Some of the sections just don't work well (# 3 Life After The Return To Life). I'd go with the something like this for your format. Intro/His Big Break/His bat crazy years/life after the show. Now these wouldn't be good headings but gives you an idea of direction I'd go. 2.You didn't mention anything about Ward prior to the show. He had to be born somewhere or spawned. Something had to make him crazy (perhaps early age substance abuse, some sort of physical or mental abuse, a family history, or maybe he loved the comics so much he modeled his life after the joker, but something). I love the fact you made him bat shit crazy. Most of your opening stuff is really good it just doesn't work as an opening maybe in section 2 or 3 pending on what direction you take.3.Don't screw with the bat universe. Ward couldn't inspire the character of the riddler but perhaps the hiring of Frank Gorshin (sp?)who played the riddler. Perhaps he too is bat shit crazy and has had dealings with Ward in the past.4.Adam West is indeed the man. His book was hilarious. It is known that the cast had a lot of sex and did a lot of drugs. Let us know how far Ward may have taken it or influenced it.5.End it making sure we know how far Ward fell after the show was canceled. What did he do for work (perhaps begger, porn star, pimp, heroin dealer, etc. etc.). Where did he live (on the streets, the YMCA, etc. etc.). How did he die (I think you get the idea by know hehe).

I love the topic but to be honest this piece needs much more work than you Xbox article. If you are a big fan then you should follow through. You obviously knew the piece needed work or you wouldn't have asked for help. I will say that many on this site may not know of Burt Ward. I found I am much older than the average age (17-21). Oh, I am sure there is a wiki article on him too. I'd add this template. Well there are my two cents. Spend 'em how you like. If you plan on editing on this site semi-regularly, I'd seek adoption (see Uncyclopedians involved with Adopt-A-Noob. If I can be of further service just let me know.

Hey Tuo, I'll get back to you on this one as soon as possible. After quickly scanning Cheap's suggestions, they look pretty good but I'll be original and come up with some of my own soon! Sir FSt. Don Pleb Yettie (talk) QotF BFF NotM RotM UNPotM UGotM CUN PEE SR UnProvise 19:29 27 May

Cool man, thanks.--Mgr. TuoDecaps ^(talk) Contribs 15:01 28 May 2008

I like it. I reckon, however, you could make Burt Ward more insane. I think you should add a few more ways in which Burt tried to kill batman. Make them utterly insane and crazy (he attempted to kill Adam West, once, by taking a knife from the catering department and a piece of piping from the effects department and hiding them in Batman's trailer, hoping the shock would kill the ageing actor). Also why was he trying to kill Adam West? Maybe you could hint at a conspiracy? Maybe Adam West was his father? Maybe Adam told Burt in the presence of a runner of the set named George Lucas?

Dunno, just bouncing some ideas about. Some of it is quite good and so good luck with this! I've already added a few changes here and there. Cheap's suggestions are pretty good so I'd take his advice and follow it, I'll stop by in a while to see how you're doing. - [15:51 28 May] Sir FSt. Don Pleb Yettie (talk) QotF BFF NotM RotM UNPotM UGotM CUN PEE SR UnProvise

Alright, thanks alot man. I like your changes.--Mgr. TuoDecaps ^(talk) Contribs 16:06 28 May 2008