|Final Score:||35||Right, so like I say, this is another great article and I think with a bit of trimming in the weaker parts and some expansion in the bits related to Rock's own racism, it could be truly awesome. I'll probably read it again in the future to see how it's going, but even if you pay no attention to what I say it's still a nice piece for your bibliography. Get back to me if you have any questions or want an opinion on something I haven't mentioned.|
|Reviewer:||--Hugs and kisses, Black_Flamingo 23:51, January 25, 2010 (UTC)|
Chris Rock: The Movie - starring Samuel L. Jackson as Chris Rock
Hey Matfen, I've just read the article again. It reads a lot better now, and did inspire a good few lols. One thing that did stand out was the last sentence of the Film and Television section, which seemed a bit awkward (I don't remember what it was now, just that it was awkward). To be honest I can't think of much else to add to my last review, but if you want me to read it again in more detail I can do that. Otherwise let me know if you're ready and maybe we could try a VFH. --Hugs and kisses, Black_Flamingo 13:59, February 18, 2010 (UTC)
Lol, this made me laugh. It has some really good jokes. Keep doing your thing, editors.
Frankly this is one of the funniest articles I have read on here in a long time. It lacks a certain tact, though- when you do make fun of him for reverse-racism try to put him across as a more of a raving lunatic than merely delusional. Maybe he's secretly in an alliance with Katt Williams and Dave Chappelle to deport all white people back to Europe or something. A little more work on flow could help as well. Vryheid 09:12, April 14, 2010 (UTC)