I found this article. It was freaking hilarious in its original format. This one is . . . less so. I think it needs to be reworked from first principles; a lot of the ideas are good, but they're just not presented properly.
--18.104.22.168 22:14, 2 Jan 2006 (UTC)
I found that the article was largely unworkable. Have started entirely afresh
--The Super Pope 21:57, 30 Jan 2006
Bollocks, I've just realised how much this overlaps with the democrazy article
Origins of Democracy
I noticed that the origins of democracy thing jumps from athenians to englishmen, ignoring the Roman Republic.--22.214.171.124 03:15, November 12, 2009 (UTC)