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  • Straight from the oven. I tried to make it encyclopedic despite the cheesy diagrams (my girfriend found it "too much serious", but I dunno... it's still too much fresh in my head). Dear gentlemen, what do you think? herr doktor needsAshuttle Rocket.gif [scream!] 19:57, 8 December 2006 (UTC)
I hate to say it, but it does stray a little bit into seriousness. Perhaps lighten the history lesson a bit. There should be more 'non-history', if you know what I mean, although that's often more difficult to write. Good effort though.--Nydas 22:10, 8 December 2006 (UTC)
I will fine-tune it tomorrow but, seeing it again now, I decided to mantain the irony-not-sarcasm/giggle-not-laugh tone. More oppinions, please? herr doktor needsAshuttle Rocket.gif [scream!] 22:20, 9 December 2006 (UTC)
Job done. New jokes added, text improved. herr doktor needsAshuttle Rocket.gif [scream!] 16:20, 11 December 2006 (UTC)
  • When I saw the title I thought this would be an Islam joke, but it wasn't. I thought the article, as stated above, seems to take a serious tone, which can be funny if implemented the right way. Notice one thing about most of the featured articles: they take a tone similar to eachother. Emulate that tone, and you've got a featured article. --~ Tophatsig.png 00:48, 12 December 2006 (UTC)
Well, Jocke, with my last edits it seems to me that I've reached a nice tone. Otherwise, may you point me out where I'm slipping from that? -- herr doktor needsAshuttle Rocket.gif [scream!] 01:06, 12 December 2006 (UTC)
Let me rephrase: It gets good at the first section after the intro, then kinda drifts away in the funniness until around civil war era, which spikes it a little bit in the humor meter, then finally it drifts away again. I'm guessing it's the midget thing that mostly turned me off the "ha ha" funniness of the article. --~ Tophatsig.png 02:16, 12 December 2006 (UTC)
Well, maybe I can't entertain JP, but I added another section. More oppinions? herr doktor needsAshuttle Rocket.gif [scream!] 18:26, 12 December 2006 (UTC)

Mecha Evolution??? This article is atheist-biased!!![edit]

Everybody knows that mechas were Intelligently(arguably) Designed.-- 02:00, 18 June 2009 (UTC)