Wow. *bows to you* Good article. I'm Polish and you would not believe the hell - the horrors! - I have endured underneath the stealthy, guiltful gaze of the Inquisition. --Littlemaggie01 04:28, 8 December 2007 (UTC)
My pleasure! You have my utter sympathy.20:07, 8 December 2007 (UTC)
From Pee Review
|Final Score:||35.6||I think your taking on a tricky one here. I know it's possible that I have totally missed the point here. In fact, I'm sure I have because I simply do not get what this is all about. Just taking the sections as they stand on their own, without the "thing I'm missing" this article does not fair very well. I tried something subtle like this in VFH a couple of weeks ago with Gay you had to really read that a whole lot, and think about it a few times, before you got the joke. People slated it, thinking it 'crass' or homopobic. That was exactly the opposite of the intention, but people missed what I was trying to do with it. I think you may have fallen into the same trap here. Maybe the thing to do is explain a little more to us dummies what it's all about allowing us to appreciate the humour better. I know it might spoil the effect a little for those who do get it, but I think you're in danger of many people missing the point, like I have.
You said that you were thinking of putting this up for VFH. In its current form I'm not sure that would be a great idea. You might get crucified!
Best of luck with this one though. I'm in-favour of people trying something which takes a little thought...
|Reviewer:||MrN 23:12, Jan 9|
|Final Score:||34.3||Relatively short article plus already being somewhat clever, so this review isn't as in-depth as my others have been. I'm glad you wanted my "services" Mordillo! Call me any time!|
|Reviewer:||• <-> Jan 15 (16:28)|
- /me sticks my oar in - hope you don't mind. I liked it, think I spotted the point - those pesky Polish Jewish grandmothers, yes? I have encountered tales of the species from a Jewish friend. However as per Cajek's review, I think it's a little subtle on that point for people who are unaware of the breed. Perhaps something about the recruitment process to the inquisition? Famed for its ruthless standards etc etc? Just a thought.
And I suspect that the sentence structure Cajek highlights as an error is in fact intentional, isn't it? Always you write me the nice article! --Sir Under User (Hi, How Are You?) VFH KUN 16:56, 15 January 2008 (UTC)