Talk:The Hell Outta Here

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Having trouble finding a good image for the start of the article... other than that, writing and formatting is going great. --Andorin Kato 05:33, 27 May 2007 (UTC)

From Pee Review[edit]

I just created this article, after spending about an hour writing it. I've decided to submit it to Pee Review before I have what I consider to be the final version, so that people can kinda point me in the right direction.

While playing Zork I stumbled upon the weapon The Hell Outta Here, and was impressed. When I looked for the article, however, I noticed that there was none! So I made one myself. Let's hope that what I've got here is a decent foundation for a good article, not a bunch of n00by junky junk. I wouldn't know. You decide. --Andorin Kato 02:10, 12 May 2007 (UTC)

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Final Score: 29 Nice use of less-overused uncyc in-joke with the Starbucks thing. You've got a good foundation, just need to build on it. Good by n00b137 standards.
Reviewer: Sir Ljlego, GUN VFH FIYC WotM SG WHotM PWotM AotM EGAEDM ANotM + (Talk) 02:45, 12 May 2007 (UTC)


Also from Pee Review[edit]

Back and (hopefully) better. I've expanded it a bit since the last Pee Review, added some better images, content, etc., so let me know what you think. Suggestions are very welcome. Thanks! --Andorin Kato 19:45, 28 May 2007 (UTC)

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Final Score: 36 Much better, still could use more.
Reviewer: Sir Ljlego, GUN VFH FIYC WotM SG WHotM PWotM AotM EGAEDM ANotM + (Talk) 20:45, 28 May 2007 (UTC)