Talk:Why?:Don't You Get a Job?

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This will be funny. Sir SysRq (talk) 19:33, 8 February 2009 (UTC)

Unless the Americans nuke it. Then it would be a nuclear waste land. - [19:49 8 February 2009] YYettie
Fucking Americans. Sir SysRq (talk) 20:14, 8 February 2009 (UTC)
And how about fucking Yetties? Sir Sockpuppet Of An Unregistered UserSexy girls.jpg Mermaid with dolphin.jpg Tired Marilyn Monroe.jpg 12:27, 12 April 2009 (UTC)
Do I need to reply here too? I bassically said what I wanted to on my talk page. Anyway stay tuned for up-dates. ~Orian57~ Icons-flag-gb.png ~Talk~ Gay sign.png 20:48 8 February 2009

Because I know HowTo:Make money without getting a job. --Pleb CUN KUN Dexter111344 Complain here Vote now! 00:33, 1 April 2009 (UTC)

Probably related but different. What do you think about mine so far though? ~Orian57~ Icons-flag-gb.png ~Talk~ Gay sign.png 00:42 1 April 2009
You are such a whore. Sir SysRq (talk) 00:43, 1 April 2009 (UTC)
Oh wait was that your's? I'll give it a proper read. Promise. ~Orian57~ Icons-flag-gb.png ~Talk~ Gay sign.png 00:45 1 April 2009
Yeah, it's good so far. Change Poke'e'mon to Poke'e'man. Other than that, I've only got two (count 'em, TWO) suggestions.
  1. Finish it.
  2. Add a like to my article (previously posted) somewhere. --Pleb CUN KUN Dexter111344 Complain here Vote now! 00:57, 1 April 2009 (UTC)
I shall indeed do both. though instead of changing it to Pok'e'man, Pok'e'mons might be better. Because stupid people do that. Pluralise the name of the franchise. That always used to annoyme. ~Orian57~ Icons-flag-gb.png ~Talk~ Gay sign.png 01:00 1 April 2009
I know what you mean cause, this one time, I got this job cleaning up the Waffle House and all, but then I got fired cause the boss said, "You made a worser mess than it'd done been." That's discrimination. --Pleb CUN KUN Dexter111344 Complain here Vote now! 01:04, 1 April 2009 (UTC)
I think you should sue for crimes against the Queen's language! There was a time where you could get beheaded for that. Probably. Maybe hung. ~Orian57~ Icons-flag-gb.png ~Talk~ Gay sign.png 03:16 1 April 2009
Just stabbed in the gut. Sir Sockpuppet Of An Unregistered UserSexy girls.jpg Mermaid with dolphin.jpg Tired Marilyn Monroe.jpg 09:53, 12 April 2009 (UTC)
Also, congratulations on finishing it. Sir Sockpuppet Of An Unregistered UserSexy girls.jpg Mermaid with dolphin.jpg Tired Marilyn Monroe.jpg 12:11, 12 April 2009 (UTC)
What do you think? good, shit, neither -- both??? I'm just ginna mainspace it now. ~Orian57~ Icons-flag-gb.png ~Talk~ Gay sign.png 12:14 12 April 2009
I think it's a great article. Cheers! Sir Sockpuppet Of An Unregistered UserSexy girls.jpg Mermaid with dolphin.jpg Tired Marilyn Monroe.jpg 12:26, 12 April 2009 (UTC)
Thanks, I just put it on pee. Would you say this was feature worthy,, after some work, obviously. ~Orian57~ Icons-flag-gb.png ~Talk~ Gay sign.png 12:28 12 April 2009
With some additional work, it may make it to featuredom. Sir Sockpuppet Of An Unregistered UserSexy girls.jpg Mermaid with dolphin.jpg Tired Marilyn Monroe.jpg 12:32, 12 April 2009 (UTC)

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Final Score: 33.8 This does seem like quite a negative review for what is, for me, an above average score, so I'll try to leaven that now. Orian, you are a good, funny writer in the sense of having good ideas and having funny things to say. I really like that. There are bits of this article that had me chuckling merrily away. I do think that with the appropriate tweaks and so forth, this will end up adding to your list of features. So don't go getting discouraged by this curmudgeonly old git!

That said, there are times when your prose feels half-finished to me, partly just in the "needs a proofread" sense, partly in the "rushing to get to the ideas and not spending enough time fleshing it out" sense. And that is probably the tl;dr version of what I've been saying up there - work it a bit more, make it feel more rounded, and you'll see the benefits. I hope!

You know the drill by now: only my opinion, others available, and the very best of British to you!

Reviewer: --UU - natter UU Manhole.gif 17:30, Apr 12

~Orian57~ Icons-flag-gb.png ~Talk~ Gay sign.png 21:52 12 April 2009