UnNews talk:America Hanged For Crimes Against Humanity

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highly sardonic unnews article i created a few days ago. Received no piss whatsoever and didn't appear as a news article. I'm afraid it might just suck and I want to know whhhhhhy!!!--AmericanBastard 03:07, 4 January 2007 (UTC)

Thanks for the pointers, I've already read the "Howto be stupid and not funny" several times and I guess it's working. I've also read a bunch of unnews in the past and the majority of them do not deviate from a single plot-line or satirical concept. You are certainly right, I did stretch a one liner but why should we incorporate a plethora of jokes into a tiny news article? HowTo:Tune up an UnNews article P.S. is it ok to drop unnews into the pee for review? --AmericanBastard 20:44, 4 January 2007 (UTC)
Heh, apparently it's fine, cause I reviewed her, didn't I? Also, I was reviewing in the context of how well it fit Uncyclopedia as a whole, and while UnNews is generally one joke stuff, Uncyclopedia as a whole strives for a bit more. That's why I took that into account.--<<http://images.wikia.com/uncyclopedia/images/f/f1/Bradmonogram.png>> 21:26, 4 January 2007 (UTC)
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Final Score: 21 Overall, I didn't find this article terribly funny nor terribly clever. The entire joke was in the title, so it felt as if a one-liner was being stretched to fill an entire page. It wasn't horrid either, however, so I would suggest that the author look for more ideas for jokes to put in the article. Check HTBFANJS for ideas in this regard.
Reviewer: --<<http://images.wikia.com/uncyclopedia/images/f/f1/Bradmonogram.png>> 19:36, 4 January 2007 (UTC)