UnNews talk:Nine year old shoots five year old

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UnNews:Nine year old shoots five year old[edit]

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Final Score: 15 Honestly, I would just scrap this article altogether. I just don't see the concept going anywhere, particularly with what your idea of good comedy seems to be. Harry Cox! Anal rape! HAHAHA! I suppose that it's possible that you're not an awful writer, but you'd have to do a lot to prove it. I doubt this article would survive VFD no matter how much you work on it. It's hopeless. Come up with a new concept and try again.
Reviewer: -- http://images.wikia.com/uncyclopedia/images/8/88/Tinymooose.gif » Sir Savethemooses Grand Commanding Officer ... holla atcha boy» 19:48, 22 September 2007 (UTC)