Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/(Quick) Referee

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I just want to know how good a first attempt at writing an article this is.

Also, I shall keep making changes up until the Pee Review template is put onto the page if I think them necessary. As soon as someone decides to reserve this Review, please either add the template or ask me to do it. Joefoxon 12:18, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

Good first attempted article, this is my first attempt at a pee review so I hope you find it useful. English peasant 22:22, May 12, 2010 (UTC)
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Final Score: 32 Overall a very good effort for a first article, very funny in places. With a bit of expansion, more work on clarifying the concept, weeding some of the randomness out and finding a couple more funny images this could be really good article.
Reviewer: English peasant 22:22, May 12, 2010 (UTC)