Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/(quick)Daron Malakian
Hey, this is an article I've been working on for a couple of hours or so, I'm trying to improve it and I really need some critisism and comments etc. It would help as I want to make it up to the standards of Uncyclopedia.\
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UU - natter
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|Final Score:||21.3||OK, I've pretty much said it all up there: keep the basic idea, explore and explain your ideas better, focus on why they're funny, and don't assume we know what you're on about. Have a good read through HTBFANJS - I find it helps, and possibly have a read of HowTo:Write A Funny Band Article, which is a tongue-in-cheek look at what people often get wrong when writing a band article.
Finally, remember: this is onnly my opinion, others are available. and good luck!
|Reviewer:||--UU - natter 21:54, Nov 3|