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12 year old girl theory[edit]

-Reads more like a HowTo: than a regular article. I will look at this closely later, but I have a headache right now. --Danny Himself 13:12, 4 January 2007 (UTC)

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Final Score: 18 You have potential to become a good writer here. Something.. just something, is holding you back. I suggest you do a bit of reading (featured articles, mainly) and eventually the idea will come, and words will blossom from your keyboard like beautiful rhodedendrons.
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Yes, I agree, this article would be better in a HowTo: format.. maybe HowTo:A famous entertainer? I don't know. —Braydie at 16:54, 5 January 2007 (UTC)