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When I was more n00bish I found a one line aricle when flicking through recent changes. I wrote a bigger article that I got to a point of non-completion and then gave up on it. Happytimes started to play with it and that got me excited. Once my interest was up I went back and rewrote huge slabs of it. Happytimes has also put a lot of effort into this. It is a true collab and I now want to see how close to featurable it is, and where, if anywhere, can we take it from here. <span class="GenOberst"> PoopyOnTheRadio </span> 07:34, 17/02/2010

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24-48 hours --Sir Skinfan13 Talk {< CUN RotM FBotM VFH ΥΣΣ Maj. SK >}17:10 EST 18 Feb, 2010

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Final Score: 24.5 I think you need to come up with one unifying concept for this article and stick with it throughout. Personally, I'd like to see you take this more toward a more real-world kind of angle, like I suggested in the first bullet under concept. This article just needs a little love and attention in terms of concept. If you have any questions or comments about this review, please feel free to leave me a message at my talk page.
Reviewer: --Sir Skinfan13 Talk {< CUN RotM FBotM VFH ΥΣΣ Maj. SK >} 00:15 EST 20 Feb, 2010