Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Object permanence
FOR YESTIMETOEDIT ONLY (Don't base your review on any of the other ones for this article that are here, YTTE. You'll do fine) • <Apr 22, 2008 [20:58]>
|Final Score:||38.75||I reckon my scoring has been quite harsh: it's a good article, but I still don't think it's quite VFH, I mean I would still vote for it if it came up for VFH now, but I think it can be better. It's funny, but could do with just a few more funny lines. Images: as I said one more would be good, concept is brilliant, the formatting does need a little bit of cleaning up. Why are all images on the right? VFH is achievable with this one, just needs a little bit of work... Good luck!|
|Reviewer:||- 06:01 23 AprilSir FSt. (QotF BFF NotM)|
Has gone through many, many revisions. It is one of my oldest articles. In-depth review, please?! • <-> Jan 11 (16:09)
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Sayeth Gerry: shotgun!!