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The article which is at Uncyclopedia:Imperial Colonization/Creationism (ignore the link above) is ready for review. We need a detailed review. Please do not review this if you actively participated in the colonization--however, any member of IC who didn't work on this article is welcome to review. Rabbi Why do I need to provide this?, humble goylem rabbi of the Temple of Narishkayt and rector of The University of Uncyclopedia, Whynersville Rabbi WHY??? (shmuesn)  05:18, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

I can get this later, but it will be longer than 24 hours, probably 2 days or a little longer. If that's not ok, please let me know. --Sir Skinfan13 Talk {< CUN RotM FBotM VFH ΥΣΣ Maj. SK >} 00:51 EST 28 Feb, 2010
That's OK. Thanks. Rabbi Why do I need to provide this?, humble goylem rabbi of the Temple of Narishkayt and rector of The University of Uncyclopedia, Whynersville Rabbi WHY??? (shmuesn)  02:13, March 1, 2010 (UTC)
Ok beginning now, could be done in an hour or two or later tonight, depends. --Sir Skinfan13 Talk {< CUN RotM FBotM VFH ΥΣΣ Maj. SK >} 11:07 EST 1 Mar, 2010
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Final Score: 40.75 If I could only recommend a few things, I would have you all do these three things:
  • redo the introduction to have it fall in line with the overall concept of the article
  • have an image alongside the introduction
  • redo most of the images to better fall in with the concept, i.e., post images that the "author" of the article would most likely include. As always, if you have questions or comments, please don't hesitate to drop me a line.
Reviewer: --Sir Skinfan13 Talk {< CUN RotM FBotM VFH ΥΣΣ Maj. SK >} 22:35 EST 1 Mar, 2010