HowTo talk:Become an Assassin

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Final Score: 30 The article needs some work on its coherence and organization, tied with an improved concept, to really flow and be laugh-out-loud funny. Still, especially with the pictures, it is amusing and was fun to read.
Reviewer: --NoNamesLeft 00:46, April 29, 2011 (UTC)
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Final Score: 31 Overall a pretty nice article, just needs a bit of polishing off (see what I did there) and some more thought put making your lists into jokes which relate back to the "how to" genre of the article. If you want to ask me any questions about the review or if you just want to chat feel free to message me at my talky page.
Reviewer: --Writey 02:43, December 16, 2011 (UTC)