HowTo talk:Stop Being a Nerd

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Final Score: 38 See End Notes
Reviewer: THINKER 19:48, 1 August 2007 (UTC)


Okay, I really like this piece and where you go with it. And per your request, yes, I would vote for it on VFH. However, there are some issues that will likely prevent it from becoming featured content:

  1. There is some immediate repetition that should be changed. A reader can parallel the jokes in the first 3 steps to the elements in the symptoms list too readily. If you want to keep the content, change the wording a bit so the correlation isn't so up-front.
  2. As is, the word "Listy" is going to appear in the against column in multiple instances. Though I think you make a good use of lists here (continuously proving my point that an article using lists as jokes is, in actuality, not listy), the fact that it is a mainspace article that is almost entirely lists is going to work against you. My suggestion would be moving this to something like HowTo: Quit Being a Nerd, or Why?: Give Up Nerdiness? or something along those lines if you wish to maintain the lists as the piece's complete body.
  3. Your Nicoderm image isn't coming through due to its size. I don't know the exact way to remedy this, but as is, it looks out of place until you click on it.

Good work Necropaxx! Consider some of these changes. But, if you're like 75% of Pee Review seekers and are planning on nomming it regardless of these painstaking endnotes, you've got at least one vote on your side. ;) --THINKER 19:48, 1 August 2007 (UTC)

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Final Score: 35 It's good, you did a good job. I think that you should remove the "this won't work for you, though" things, as they ruin the pseudoseriousness.
Reviewer: --Lord Fluffy who rains fire from the heavens 14:58, 10 August 2007 (UTC)


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Final Score: 39 Yes, I would vote for this harticle in VFH. Please remind me to do so when the time comes.
Reviewer: -- di Mario 19:45, 14 August 2007 (UTC)


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Final Score: 43 I'd vote for it, if I remember to visit VFH anytime soon. Good article. A few fixes, and 2 red links that would be nice if they are worked out. Good job. I have to go work on step 2 now. Good thing I have my cheez whiz soap autographed by George Lucas
Reviewer: Fresh Stain Serq Fet of Pokemon (At your service) 23:46, 4 September 2007 (UTC)


Good[edit]

I should stop being an uncyclopedia nerd.--Dummmmmmy 22:36, 31 October 2007 (UTC)