From Pee Review
I wrote this article when I was barely awake and the result is rather weird. It's been marked as needing fixing, and now that I'm fully conscious I can see that it is a kind of lame idea. Can anything humorous be salvaged from this mess? The typos have all been fixed, anyway, but the article itself...I don't know. I need opinions!!!!!
|Final Score:||19||Loose-cannon prose and randomness humor weigh down a compelling theory. Keep at it!|
A superb article! I really love the idea of the medieval boring period! You could add something on "climb-it" gate. I suppose it would have to be a controversy about how to climb a gate ... which funnily enough I'm a bit of an expert on. You really should climb the hinge end because it is strongest!
Love the picture of the kid yawning! 126.96.36.199 11:51, July 14, 2010 (UTC)