Talk:Sausage Festival

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 –  User talk:Zana Dark User:Zana Dark (ooh!) (aah!) ...·º•ø®@» LEG CUN GUN 04:29, 1 June 2009 04:29, 1 June 2009 (UTC)

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This article is under review by none other than.....

Let down your hopes, eh?
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Final Score: 28.8 Here are the main things you have to do with your article to get if to , what I expect, is VFH standards:
  1. Expand on the good ideas. -You article definitely isn't finished. You have to get the ideas and expand on them for this article to be finished.
  2. Dear god get rid of some pictures - I can't emphasize how cruaal this is. For me, it sorta spoiled the article.
  3. Make a conclusion - You article ended quickly and abruptly, so you have to do soemthing about that.
  4. Pick a definite concept - This sort of goes with the first one, but make sure to choose respecting the sausage or the funding of a school.

Just fix these four problems, and you'll have a good article. Good luck with it!

Reviewer: Staircase CUNt 18:28, 1 June 2009 (UTC)