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My newest article. Some news this time. Seunketchup88 07:53, 25 February 2008 (UTC)

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Final Score: 25 It seems like you've been getting a little better as far as having a good concept to follow. You set it up at the beginning (sort of) and then take off running in the opposite direction. Also, your writing could use a great deal of improvement. Keep practicing, this article writing business takes a long time to get good at. Hell, I've been here on and off for well over a year now and I still don't have a single feature. It's hard to write a good article. I'm glad you're using Pee Review to allow us to help you get better at it!
Reviewer: ~Minitrue Sir SysRq! Talk! Sex! =/ GUNWotMRotMAotMVFHSKPEEINGHPBFF (@ 17:53 Feb 27)