Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Ars Bandeet

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Ars Bandeet[edit]

Give me a good going over --OliverKnight 22:09, 28 December 2007 (UTC)

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Final Score: 32.5 All in all, a good approach to the concept, just could do with a bit of polishing to give it a bit of an extra "encyclopedia" feel (which I also think will help the humour as it will give a greater contrast between the seriousness of an encyclopedia article and the silliness of the innuendo), and I think the references to dicks should be replaced with something a bit more subtle.
Reviewer: JGDross 13:37, 25 January 2008 (UTC)