Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Dear Jenna

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This both does and doesn't look done to me. Helpful suggestions would be helpful. http://images.wikia.com/uncyclopedia/images/b/bf/Tinymasaru.gifpillow talk 03:23, 26 January 2009 (UTC)

Driveby: I don't get it. Is it in reference to something? --Mnbvcxz 05:05, 26 January 2009 (UTC)
Well, it riffs on the song "Why do birds suddenly appear every time you are near"... that's... about what it refers to, there. http://images.wikia.com/uncyclopedia/images/b/bf/Tinymasaru.gifpillow talk 05:19, 26 January 2009 (UTC)
It is simply amazing just cause this line, "Actually, im scared of the bees". Brilliant hahaha--Tagstit 07:26, 26 January 2009 (UTC)
I added my own tweaks. I really like the concept though, and my changes are fairly minor. --Sultanofsurreal 11:49, 26 January 2009 (UTC)
Well, it looks like you jumped in there and did some miscellaneous rewording. I'm not sure how I feel about it. If the reviewer wouldn't mind giving some of his or her (okay, his) thoughts on the difference between the two versions, that could be helpful. http://images.wikia.com/uncyclopedia/images/b/bf/Tinymasaru.gifpillow talk 15:19, 26 January 2009 (UTC)
Hahaha! Same as Tagstit. Great last sentence there. Liked the whole letter and concept but could think of a few sentences or paragrafs that could be rephrased to better the quality if the text. Not how funny it is but just make it more simple to read. Give it a nicer flow. That'd be my only hint. Otherwise, thumbs up! --kit 22:13, 27 January 2009 (UTC)
Outhouse.JPG   Tagstit   doesn't believe in new fancy-pancy toilet systems with running water and all. Just a hole in the ground with a lil' cover will do. Now gimme' your article and I'll be done in a few minutes.

While you are welcome to review this, I suggest you find another article in need of help so that we can clear the ever growing Pee Request list.

Meh, I will try this one.

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Final Score: 29 I liked it. More of a funny little side read than a feature. I hope I helped! If I didn't, just resubmit it and I am sorry. Good luck!
Reviewer: ~SirTagstitVFHNotMPEEINGCPTRotMBFF 09:56, 31 January 2009 (UTC)