Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Fruit Sallad

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Here goes nothing - My first article. Maybe its just me but i've had a few friends read it and they liked it so i feel a bit proud. Of course there may be (and surely) are things that could be done differently and better so please pee ahead. Have no mercy.. if it sucks let me know and be honest. And if you like it let me know as well, my ego can take it. Cheers kit 09:39, 15 January 2009 (UTC)

I got this. --Tagstit 16:02, 15 January 2009 (UTC)

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Final Score: 31 Well, an impressive start. Your concept could use a little work and maybe your next article will have a better concept behind it but don't give up on this one! A few fixes and you will have an impressive piece of work! Good luck!
Reviewer: --Tagstit 16:47, 15 January 2009 (UTC)