Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Hyperdimension Sandwich Maker

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umm...hi this is my first ever article so id like to know where it stands compared to other articles cos im obviously biased...many thanks in advance to whoever can take the time to give this article a quick once over.....Flare 20:19, 3 December 2008 (UTC)

Flare 20:09, 3 December 2008 (UTC)

I'm on it. Hope to have this review done by the end of the day. sirhttp://images.wikia.com/uncyclopedia/images/e/e3/Ignignokt.gifsysrq @ 15:11 Dec 4
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Checkit bitches, this review is as good as peed on. I'm marking my effing territory. Said article is being reviewed by:
~Minitrue Sir SysRq! Talk! Sex! =/ GUNWotMRotMAotMVFHSKPEEINGHPBFF 

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Final Score: 24.1 Overall, I would say that this is an article with potential, but still needs a lot of work. It's not in danger of being deleted any time soon, but it certainly is not ready for feature either. I think that if you give it some serious love, and maybe even an extensive rewrite following this advice, you could make this into a great article. I look forward to seeing the result. Please contact me on my talk page if you have any more questions.
Reviewer: sirhttp://images.wikia.com/uncyclopedia/images/2/20/Err.gifsysrq @ 18:31 Dec 6