Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Isaac The Tank Engine

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There's already been a little discussion on the talk page, but I'm asking if you do review then to avoid the talk until after the review is done as I would prefer you to come at this with no pre-conceived notions.<span class="GenOberst"> PoopyOnTheRadio </span> 02:54, 8 July 2009 (UTC)

Just skimmed through this, and it looks like it could be alright. I'll try and review it in the next day or two when I've got a little more time. —Unführer Guildy Ritter von Guildensternenstein 00:36, 19 July 2009 (UTC)
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Final Score: 38 Kill the last section, and add more "haha's". Otherwise, this is an incredibly good article. You're obviously newer here, and this is an impressive article from a n00b--keep it up.
Reviewer: Unführer Guildy Ritter von Guildensternenstein 14:59, 19 July 2009 (UTC)

Post-Review Edit: I should also mention I wasn't really a fan of the black-out bits, though that's really just a trifling complaint. —Unführer Guildy Ritter von Guildensternenstein 15:33, 19 July 2009 (UTC)