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Fadda Murphy thanks you for doing a review. He wants me to tell you that for doing that you get a thousand years taken off your sentence in purgatory. The article needs a few more links, which I'll work on. Thanks for your kind attention, but I know you're really doing this for the Church, praise the Lord. Aleister in Chains

I'll review the shit out of this. Give me until tomorrow night. --Hugs and kisses, Black_Flamingo 20:59, March 2, 2010 (UTC)
Thanks, take as long as you'd like, no hurry. As for reviewing the shit out of it, all I can say is yummy! Aleister in Wonderland 14:28 3.3. 2mx
Hiatus has put some really good and relevant data on the talk page, which could end up to be a good information depository for the page. Al, later that day.
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Final Score: 36.3 So to sum up, this is a good article and I really enjoyed reading it. Your only problems are fairly minor and don't detract too much. A little bit more focus and clarity and this could very easily become a great piece. So having said that, I'll let you work on it for a while then maybe we'll talk about a VFH nom.

Well that's that. I hope you find this review useful, but if you do need any clarification on anything, or want me to take a look at any changes you make, get back to me and I'll be glad to help. Good luck with the changes 'n' shit.

Reviewer: --Hugs and kisses, Black_Flamingo 20:04, March 3, 2010 (UTC)