Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Objects in mirror are closer than they appear

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Objects in mirror are closer than they appear[edit]

I'm not just calling for a review here, people, I need help. I came up with the idea for this at 5 in the morning after a drunken bender. See the template at the top? That's me. I took my own picture so this article could exist properly, and yet it still doesn't. Tell me what you think, and please, please, add something to my article if you can. Snail boy 03:31, 25 May 2007 (UTC)

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Final Score: 33 It's a great start to an article, but that's all it is. I guarantee that ICU'll vanish with some expansion.
Reviewer: --Wehpudicontok--Welcome to Vaporstory! 06:00, 25 May 2007 (UTC)

If you're looking for expansion material, I suggest adding some "little-known facts" about the message. A history, for instance. Most articles on here have one; in this case, it would be a great opportunity to demonstrate what horrible catastrophes could arise if some poor idiot were confused as to the size of the objects in his mirror. (Don't start the section with "was invented by/in," though, if you can avoid it.) You could have sections on cultural references (you'd be surprised), or "worldwide impact," which would probably be an expansion of the UK and China section that's already there.

Overall, it's got potential. It just needs expansion, that's all. --Wehpudicontok--Welcome to Vaporstory! 06:00, 25 May 2007 (UTC)