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UnNews:Iraq wins war; United States declares total surrender[edit]

My first UnNews article, it's designed to get you thinking, so I'd like it to be reviewed by someone with an ear for subtle satire. DarkBlue 22:49, 19 February 2008 (UTC)

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Final Score: 27.5 I gotta say, this is a pretty weak article. It lacks jokes, substance, and direction. Don't be discouraged! This can all be fixed! It's not bad for a first UnNews article, and I'm glad you came to Pee Review because that tells me you're open to criticism and willing to take some advice so you can learn how to make it better the next time. It's all a learning process, no one expects you to become a great writer overnight. I hope you take my advice into consideration and rewrite this article to bring it up to Uncyclopedia standards.
Reviewer: ~Minitrue Sir SysRq! Talk! Sex! =/ GUNWotMRotMAotMVFHSKPEEINGHPBFF (@ 02:12 Feb 20)