Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/releasimification (3rd review)

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Just wondering what you guys (hyperbole) thought now. This article is fairly new, and I was wondering that if w/time this article would be funny?--Bobofosho2 20:15, 7 June 2008 (UTC)

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Checkit bitches, this review is as good as peed on. I'm marking my effing territory. Said article is being reviewed by:
~Minitrue Sir SysRq! Talk! Sex! =/ GUNWotMRotMAotMVFHSKPEEINGHPBFF 

If you wanted a fresh opinion on this (although Hyperbole is a fine reviewer) I'd be more than happy to do this. ~Minitrue Sir SysRq! Talk! Sex! =/ GUNWotMRotMAotMVFHSKPEEINGHPBFF @ 15:37 Jun 8

go ahead and do the review, thanks-Bobofosho2 16:20, 8 June 2008 (UTC)
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Final Score: 11 I have a little to-do list for this article, in case you tl;dr'd the above review.
  1. Find a central theme for this article. Develop this idea and make it a single, funny joke that you can base the rest of your jokes on.
  2. Make the humor consistent. Don't just think that adding words like "bitches" and "hos" is going to be humorous all by themselves. You need real jokes that support your concept.
  3. Make the writing consistent. Clean up your tone, keep one consistent voice with your writing.
  4. Get new images. If you don't have the means to make your own images, head on down to UN:PIC.

I hope this review is helpful. Good luck with this!


Reviewer: ~Minitrue Sir SysRq! Talk! Sex! =/ GUNWotMRotMAotMVFHSKPEEINGHPBFF @ 00:20 Jun 9