User:Jocke Pirat/PLS Judging

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All scores, at least in the humour section, have been given a small amount of mercy points to compensate for me being an asshole.

User:Modusoperandi/Segue: a monologue[edit]

ELITE REVIEW COMMITTEE Article Reviewed by Member: Unsigned
Humor 17/20 There were a few chuckles here and there. A rather good article. QFH quality at minimum.
Concept 8/10 No Comment
Formatting 7/10 Rather than showing actions like this <points there>, actions done like this (points here) or this [points here again] might look a little better. Since it's a monologue/book article, it isn't going to be organised in the best manner.
Prose and Mechanics 9/10 I didn't see many errors, if any.
Illustrations 7/10 They fit into the article, and are consistent in style, but there's something I cant place my home row on...
Completeness 10/10 Everything tied up rather well.
Coherency 9/10 Coherency isn't needed in this style, really, but it follows well in a stream of consciousness.
HE Rating 0/10
Reccomendation Yes
Total 53/70 Well done.
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User:Mhaille/Horatio Hornblower[edit]

ELITE REVIEW COMMITTEE Article Reviewed by Member: Unsigned
Humor 16/20 Gay jokes seem to dominate it for the most part in addition to (possibly) a few allusions to the character I was unable to detect.
Concept 7/10 I do not know who Horatio Hornblower is, and a Wikipedia article isn't going to make an adequate substitute here.
Formatting 9/10 Formatted was quite good, although the Web .98b-ish {{Q}} is used. It's like that one stain on the you can't get off your otherwise good.
Prose and Mechanics 9/10 Again, I didn't see any real errors during my trek through.
Illustrations 8/10 Decent pictures that gave some smile.
Completeness 9/10 There isn't a real need to tie up. The character was explored well.
Coherency 10/10 It made sense.
HE Rating 0/10
Reccomendation Yes
Total 51/70 Yay.
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User:CartoonDiablo/Crank that (Soulja Boy)[edit]

ELITE REVIEW COMMITTEE Article Reviewed by Member: Unsigned
Humor 12/20 Average in quality, really.
Concept 7/10 A fair concept and subject matter.
Formatting 5/10 The article looked like it was cut off, and pictures were in chaos.
Prose and Mechanics 5/10 Words are misused (overseas, not oversees), and commas are sometimes missing or misplaced.
Illustrations 6/10 Relevent, but text-based in one. At least one IIRC is unoriginal, another looking unoriginal but I do not know. The remaining contribute decently.
Completeness 5/10 It looked like it was never completed and it never wrapped up. The subject could be written about better, and an infobox used.
Coherency 6/10 The article seemed a little broken, and a bit off-topic sometimes.
HE Rating 0/10
Reccomendation Yes (Barely)
Total 35/70 Meh.
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User:Kaizer_the_Bjorn/Übermensch[edit]

ELITE REVIEW COMMITTEE Article Reviewed by Member: Unsigned
Humor 18/20 What can I say? I enjoyed it.
Concept 9/10 Good.
Formatting 6/10 My browser makes a big gap between the intro and the TOC. The article has an uncomplete feeling at the end.
Prose and Mechanics 9/10 I saw nothing.
Illustrations 8/10 Good. Decently modified. The second gave me a sort of good
Completeness 7/10 The article looks cut off at the end and thus could do well with the addition of a "see also". A little more depth would be nice as well.
Coherency 9/10 No Comment
HE Rating 0/10
Reccomendation Yes
Total 52/70 * Golf Clap *
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User:Zombiebaron/wip/UnBooks:The True Story of: Jimmy and the aliens; based on a true story[edit]

ELITE REVIEW COMMITTEE Article Reviewed by Member: Unsigned
Humor 19/20 Quite funny.
Concept 7/10 A fair concept and subject matter.
Formatting 5/10 Can't give you many points here because it's all in images and there is an excessive use of horizontal rules. Arial Black was not a nice font choice. Century Gothic (normal) would have given a little better children's book feel.
Prose and Mechanics 8/10 Nothing seems out of place.
Illustrations 10/10 It is the story, and it's in PNG so it's nice and focused, and that's a bonus.
Completeness 9/10 Complete.
Coherency 8/10 Made sense.
HE Rating 0/10
Reccomendation Yes
Total 51/70 !
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